Saturday, December 17, 2011

Breaking out of rhyme

I've been wanting to write proper non-rhymed poems for a long time. Today while thinking of something good to put on a greeting card, I thought of this:

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Red war, white snowstorm;
Ochre desert sand, blue seas--
But the One, sees green.
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I guess it looks a bit like a haiku, but I don't really know if it fits the rules, so I'll simply call it a tiny non-rhyming poem for now.

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